Heavystep

[snowtuft]

Heavystep
I may be large, but I'm still just as fast as you, if not faster...

NAME... Heavykit.Heavypaw.Heavystep.Heavystar
AGE... 20 moons
GENDER... Female
CLAN... LionClan
POSITION... Warrior
SPECIES... African Lion

APPEARANCE...

Heavystep is a large female, larger than most, maybe even as large as Blackstar. Her coat is white like snow and her legs are long and powerful. Her eyes are a pale green-blue color, very beautiful to look at. Her paws are large and can pack quite a punch. Heavystep's tail is also missing half of itself, so she only has half a tail. This is due to a fight in her youth. Heavystep also has a missing toe...

PERSONALITY...

Heavystep is a social lion. She likes to be around others and is quite playful. But she won't attack tails or trip others and laugh. She is more mature than that. However, Heavystep is easily offended, which means she is easily irritated. Heavystep isn't fun to be around when she is upset. A lot of things get her down, but it is a hard task to accolmplish, getting Heavystep down. She is very optimistic, always finding something good about every situation.

HISTORY...

Heavykit was born the biggest in her litter, along with a sister Ivykit who died as an apprentice. Heavykit loved playing with Ivykit, always bouncing around. But because of Heavykit's large size, she always had to be careful not to squash her sister. Heavykit was loved by all the clan, always admired for her curiosity and optimism. Even Blackstar liked her, and that large lion didn't like anyone. She turned into an apprentice and was trained by Blackstar. She was eager to learn and Blackstar was always patient with the energetic female. But during a battle, her sister Ivypaw died in the claws of a CheetahClan warrior named Ashstorm. Heavypaw was never the same after that. She moped around camp, only gave half effort in training, and never trusted anyone except Blackstar and the medicine cat. Her parents were torn up about it and left to live as rouges, staying together though. She finally made warrior status and finished her silent vigil. But now that she is over Ivypaw's death, she is finally starting to return to her old self.

[crush]

Pending
Your appearance, although over the word minimum, seems very much minimized in details, like it was just kept very vague. Some more detail there would be really good.

As for your personality, it simply isn't long enough. It's vague, only touching on a few traits and not fully explaining them in most contexts, and it is also under the word minimum and so it must be more embellished or the app simply will not be accepted.